Thursday, December 13, 2012

Final Workshop Reflection -- ENG 247 Fall 2012


Obliviously, I took this course as an accident. Most likely because of the cancelation of my previous signed up classes. I needed a fourth class, and it has to be an elective. So, that's how I stumbled with this course. I never had a writing class before, at least a creative writing class. It's either a literally course, basic ENG 101 courses, or back in my high school's journalism/yearbook. This is different class is completely different from all those classes. I have written research papers, literary responses, poetry but not even once I wrote "creative non-fiction."  It takes me out of the bubble, and actually write it however I want but with connected to a particular theme. So, in a way, it's basically writing outside the box. Not typical research paper but every day life, a story wise. I enjoyed that better than those other English classes. But I guess you really have to learn the basics with language, grammar and syntax first before you get into any journalism/writing type of field. 

I think all the readings for this course are all fairly interesting. But we really didn't have enough time to analyze or to read all them since it's only a semester thing. To name a few, Angela's Ashes, Joe Gould's Secret, In Cold Blood, Me Talk Pretty One Day and Prodigies. Somehow, I can relate. 

           "Standing amongst a sea of faceless strangers, eyeing train 281’s status on the arrival board, waiting patiently for the big red ‘BOARDING’ next to it. I exhaled deeply, took a sip of my ice coffee, put my backpack down next to my duffle, and slowly lean against the staircase railing on the center of the spacious station – I close my eyes, reminiscing how I met her, my princesa, I’m eager to see her.
            A week ago, I attended a college diversity weekend and of course, just like any other non-New York City-like place, it was very relaxing, slow pace, small town right outside of Boston, surrounded by Victorian brick houses – renovated like modern houses, a large pond connected to a river down the stream, countless trees and the leaves of fall – purple, red, orange, yellow – descends as chilly autumn breeze kisses my tan skin. It was a sunset late afternoon as I approach Mark’s House, clubhouse where meetings are held. Ding-dong, the bell rang, a cheerful young woman, with bleach blond hair welcomes me inside. My eyes scanned across the room, various students from different ethnicities, shapes, color and sizes are all packed together, jammed at the center of the clubhouse’s lounge. I took a seat, beside an acquaintance, rubbing off numbness of my frozen hands, stands before me, lady wearing a fitted white long-sleeve, blue jeans, caramel-skinned, brown hair tied in a bun, her Coca-Cola bottle shaped like figure. I thought to myself, I’d tapped that." -- Place Assignment Original Piece by Kim Bartolome 

I think this piece was an okay piece,  not because it was a confusing love story, but because how it was written. Time warp reminiscing, then description of places and people that relevant to the story. I am not so sure if I want something published at the moment, especially I think I really didn't do such a good job on it. But other than that, perhaps someday I would shoot Prof. Dragan an email if I change my mind. 

Thursday, December 6, 2012

Personal Memoir (Are You Really My Mother?) -- Author's Notes

It leaves my body cold every time I discuss this aspect of my childhood. What actually inspired me to write a story as a rite passage of letting go, sure most people -- especially my mom to this day, would argue with me about overreacting to what had happened that day. But I think it comes to the point of, parents do not realizing the decisions they make could hurt us. That day, my parents have made a decision of making a life-changing decision, they traded their old ways, home, and possibly, "luxury, jobs, opportunities, America"

A lot parents do not realized how badly affected their decision can scar or damage their kids, although for good. They value money more than anything that I've ever imagine. They constantly work like dogs, and currently bragging how much we spent. Never they value their family in their own way. I realized that when I lived with my parents after 12 years of separation. The person I had in mind when writing about this piece was my mother and I, 6 years ago. The piece started from what I remember from my childhood when she left and my reaction when she finally decided to come back to my life.

Hard as it is for us both, I had my own personality and was already established as an individual but much to her dismay, her young "baby" - as she would say - would still her baby. I really do not wanted to be treated as a 2 year old when I was, at that time, 13. Reflecting from it now, it was really a powerful thing and affected our relationship greatly. Of course, as denying as my mom is -- even from "doing the right thing" -- she won't accept it.  No journal, no nothing, just a pure memory written straightly from my memories to MS Doc.